[Dream] N0.6 - I just can't think of a title.

[Kudos]

This track I started in 2003 I think. It's my first track in Cubase 
actually. I polished it up over time now here it is still unfinished, 
but sounding much fatter including newer bits.

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/k_u_d_o_s/Kud...d)%209Mar07.mp3
This link written before the file has finished uploading - should be 
correct!

Sequencer used : Cubase SX3
Percussion: Halion 3
Bass: Pentagon I
Synths: z3ta+
All samples made from public domain one-shot percussion samples, except 
for stretched lead sample and shimmering-thing recorded from Korg 01W

In partiulcar I'd like to know:

What it's missing (or what you'd like to hear as extra sounds) and I'll 
see what I can do.

Any part of it does your head in?  Let me know!

Comment on the balance/quality of the mix, eq'ing etc cos I'm tryin to 
get this down to fine art. How does it sound through your speakers (I've 
got cr at p ones) compared to other tracks, released or unlreleased or even 
your own music?


SOMEONE SUGGEST A TITLE!

Thanks

Olly